in my first tutor feeback with pete he told me to:
Issue: sustainability within the food industry
practical: in progress depending on final question
Introduction:
break down my essay and look into the key themes and define the main terms that I am going to be tlaking about.
dig deeper in sustainability, give exapmles.
also define who the consumers are I am talking about.
look into case studies that best represent your agument
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